IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 6
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 6 (General Training)
6.0
Overall Score
03 Aug 24, 09:02
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses all the bullet points but has several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. The coherence and cohesion are adequate, but the vocabulary usage is somewhat limited and repetitive. The formality is mostly appropriate, but there are minor issues with structure and clarity.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 6.0 |
| Total Errors | 17 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6 | |
| Lexical resource | 7 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 1 |
Question
You have seen an advertisement in a local newspaper for a part-time job at a bookstore. Write a letter to the bookstore manager.
Explain why you are interested in the job
Describe how your previous experience makes you a suitable candidate
Provide your availability for an interview
#Job Application
#Formal
Submitted Answer
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Words:209
Paragraphs:10
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3rd
August,2024
To
The Manager
Zian Book Store, Kathmandu
Respected Sir,
This is to inform you about my
curiousity
and sincerity to your publishment
in the Himalayan Times for the post of general bookstore
keeper. I have been engaged in the same line for past
six years and I do acknowledge about books a lot. As the matter of fact, I worked at the Bookworm Store for six years and I have achieved plethora of reasons to continue in the same line.Well, I have also been in contact with many publishers, who have helped me leave a mark on this journey.They usually contact me if in case of any further publishing procedures. I am
whole-heartedly
interested in working with you
as I carry a lot of love for books .I also carry full dedication towards this job and head over heels for this post.I shall remain positive in accordance with your response. I feel myself a suitable candidate for this post as I have
a years
of experience in this field. If you may choose me for an interview, I shall be available on 5th of August, 2025
. Looking forward to seeing you. Thankyou
sir/maam
. Have a great time .Yours sincerely,
Meera Khadka