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The response provides a basic overview of the data but lacks precision in data reporting and contains several grammatical errors. Improved coherence and a more varied vocabulary would enhance the clarity and effectiveness of the description.
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Writing Task

#Energy Consumption
#Line Chart
The line chart illustrates the energy consumption in terawatt-hours (TWh) for four countries: USA, China, Germany, and India from 2010 to 2015.
Summarize the overall trend of energy consumption in each country.
Compare the energy consumption trends between the countries.
Identify any significant changes in energy consumption within the period.

Submitted Answer

Words191|Paragraphs4
English:UK English
Global Issues:
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the graph
ilustrates
the number of energy consumption for four countries
ove
the
five year
period.
in
2010
china
consume
3000 TWh which rose to 3200
twh
in 2011.
the
number of energy consumption in
china
continued to grow, reaching 3500 TWh in 2012, 3700 in 2013, 4200 in 2014 and 4500
twh
in 2015.
india has a steady increase in the number of energy consumption followed by china.
in
2010, they reached 2000 TWh in energy consumption that
rise
progressively in the next 4 years as many as 2200 in 2011, 2300 in 2012, 2375 in 2013, 2400 in 2014 and got they pick at 2500 TWh in 2015.
USA has a
fluctuative
increase that can be shown from the graph.
their
peak in
enery
consumption occur at 2014 with 4600 TWh in amount.
the
number of energy consumption
increase
in 2010 until 2014 and
decrease
at
2015 as many as 100 TWh from the previous year.
germany as a country that has steady decreasing in graph for energy consumption.
the
amount has
drop
each year from 2010-2015 with the lowest energy consumption in2015 as many as 1300 TWh

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