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The response provides a basic overview of the data but lacks detailed analysis and clarity. Grammatical errors and limited vocabulary affect coherence and task achievement, while the description of trends is not fully accurate or comprehensive.
Overall score5.0
Grammatical range and accuracy5.0
Lexical resource5.0
Coherence & cohesion5.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors36
Grammatical range and accuracy16
Lexical resource15
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response2

Writing Task

#Transportation
#Line Chart
Describe the changes in the number of commuters using different modes of transport in New York City from 2010 to 2020.
Summarize the main trends for each mode of transport.
Compare the fluctuations among the different modes.
Identify any significant changes or anomalies over the period.

Submitted Answer

Words199|Paragraphs5
English:UK English
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the diagram illustrates the different modes of
tansportation
in a span of 10 years in
new york
city.
in general,
subway
is commonly used
accross
all the
years
while bicycle is the least used.
to
add on that, all the modes of
tansport
shows a
rising
trend
exept
the bus which is
seen
to drop in year 2014 onwards to 2020.
a larger population is
seen
to prefer using
subway
which
is is
seen
to be
above
500000 at the start
2010
and still
rising
over the years to just
somewhat
below 600,000 in the year 2020.
compared
to car which comes second, it fluctuates while the other appears steadily
rising
all through
fromm
400000 to 500000 in 2010 to 2020.
Bus comes in third place, and the average number of users at the start is
seen
to
be
300000 but is
seen
to be
icreasing
alittle
bit before decreasing in the year 2014 all the way to 2016.
despite
the fact, it was still above the bicycle which starts at approximately 50000 then
rises
steadly
to just above 100000.
in conclusion,
subway
is the most
preffered
mode of transport in
new york
as illustrated in the diagram.

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