IELTS Writing Academic Checker - Sample Band 6
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The response provides a basic summary of the data, but lacks variety in sentence structures and contains some grammatical errors. The task is generally addressed, but the coherence and cohesion could be improved with better organization and linking phrases.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 6.0 |
| Total Errors | 29 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 11 | |
| Lexical resource | 14 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 1 |
Question
Sydney
Toronto
The pie charts display the proportion of different housing types in Sydney and Toronto in 2023, given in percentages. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Highlight the main housing types in each city.
Compare the proportions of detached houses in Sydney and Toronto.
Discuss any significant trends or patterns observed in the data.
#Housing
#Pie Chart
Submitted Answer
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both charts
give
information about the different percentages of housing types in Toronto and Sydney in 2023. overall
, countries have different choices of house type. most
people in Sydney prefer
to live
in detached
houses, while people in Toronto prefer
to live
in apartments
.in detail,
for
Sydney, detached
houses were people's most chosen
type of house with 35 percent. 30 percent of people prefer
to live
in apartments
. 20 percent of people were more likely to live
in semi-detached houses. 10 percent of them choose
to live
in townhouses
and the other
5 percent choose
the other
type of house.in Toronto, 40 percent of people
prefer
to live
in apartments
. 30 of them prefer
to live
in detached
houses. 15 percent of the people choose
to live
in semi-detached houses. 10 percent of them are more likely to live
in townhouses
and 5 other
percent
live in other
types of houses.from both countries, we can see that
apartments
and detached
houses were the most popular type of houses
, while townhouses
and the other
were the least popular