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The response provides a clear overview of the rent prices in different cities, with accurate data references. However, minor grammatical errors and limited vocabulary variety slightly affect the overall quality.
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| Grammatical range and accuracy | 7.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 7.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 7.0 | |
| Task response | 7.0 |
| Total Errors | 10 | |
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| Lexical resource | 4 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
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| City | Apartment | Detached House | Townhouse | Studio |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| New York | 3000 | 4500 | 3500 | 2500 |
| San Francisco | 3500 | 5000 | 4000 | 3000 |
| Chicago | 2000 | 3500 | 2500 | 1500 |
| Miami | 2500 | 4000 | 3000 | 2000 |
| Seattle | 2700 | 4200 | 3200 | 2200 |
The table below depicts the average rent prices (in USD) for different types of housing in five cities in 2020.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
Compare the average rent prices for the different types of housing.
Highlight any significant differences between the cities.
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Submitted Answer
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This table illustrates the difference in rent pricing in five US cities across four types of housing.
Overall, San Francisco was the most expensive city to live in, while Chicago was the cheapest. In each town, studios required the least amount of rent, unlike detached houses, which needed the most.
Furthermore,
townhouses
consistently cost $500 more than apartments
regardless of the place. As for Studios, they were steadily $2000 cheaper than detached homes.Moreover, the most costly property in San Francisco was rated at $5000, in
comparision
with $3500 in Chicago. On the other hand, The lowest real estate moneywise in Chicago was $1500, whereas in San Francisco it was $3000.