IELTS Writing Academic Checker - Sample Band 5
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The response provides a general overview of the data but contains several inaccuracies and lacks clarity in some parts. Grammatical errors and limited vocabulary usage affect the overall coherence and task achievement.
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| City | Apartment | Detached House | Townhouse | Studio |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| New York | 3000 | 4500 | 3500 | 2500 |
| San Francisco | 3500 | 5000 | 4000 | 3000 |
| Chicago | 2000 | 3500 | 2500 | 1500 |
| Miami | 2500 | 4000 | 3000 | 2000 |
| Seattle | 2700 | 4200 | 3200 | 2200 |
The table below depicts the average rent prices (in USD) for different types of housing in five cities in 2020.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
Compare the average rent prices for the different types of housing.
Highlight any significant differences between the cities.
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This table illustrates the average prices of renting in five various cities. Overall, it can be noticed that while all the types of housing cost between 1500 and 5000 dollars, renting in San Francisco costs the highest.
Detached houses cost the most in all the cities. In New York and San Fransisco the prices are 4500, 5000 USD respectively. However, this kind of
houses
costs less in Miami and Seattle of around 41000 USD. Chicago has the least prices of all. Townhouse
prices are also high, in New York and San Fransciso around 4800 USD, and a little less in the other three cities of an amount of around 4000 USD.Apartments and Studios have nearly close prices. In every city of the five. The cost of
apartments
is 500 USD higher than the prices of studios. In Chicago, Miami and Seattle the prices are all around 2000 USD. In contrast, prices in New york and Fransisco are a little more (around 3000 USD).