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The response effectively compares water usage in South Africa and Canada, accurately reflecting the data. However, minor grammatical errors and slightly limited vocabulary range affect the overall clarity and sophistication of the writing.
| Overall score | 7.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 7.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 7.0 | |
| Task response | 7.0 |
| Total Errors | 13 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4 | |
| Lexical resource | 5 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 1 |
Writing Task
#Water Usage
#Pie Chart
Discuss the water usage in different sectors in South Africa and Canada in 2018.
Identify the key trends and features from the data.
Compare the water usage patterns between the two countries.
Highlight any significant observations or differences.
Canada
South Africa
Submitted Answer
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This pie chart illustrates the difference of water usage in different sectors in South Africa and Canada in the year 2018.
Both of these charts indicate that Canada and South Africa use most of their water towards the agriculture and domestic use, while public services and other services demand the least usage of water. It also
shows
that industrial sectors are almost of the same usage in both countries.The chart shows a significant difference between the agriculture and domestic sectors with South Africa using up 70% in agriculture while
Canada
usage when it comes to agriculture is 35%. When looking at Canada, the domestic usage of 40% being almost three times that of South Africa at 15%. The other sectors
including industrial, public services, and other secters
are higher in Canada than South africa but both at quite similar low percentages.Water usage differs from country to country.
Canadas
usage tends to be more spread amonst
the sectors than South
Africa.