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06 Apr 25, 12:27

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The response provides a general overview of the data but lacks precision in describing trends and specific data points. Grammatical errors and awkward phrasing affect clarity, while vocabulary is adequate but not varied.

Overall score	5.5
Grammatical range and accuracy	5.0
Lexical resource	6.0
Coherence & cohesion	6.0
Task response	5.0

Writing Task

#Tourism

#Line Chart

Examine the line chart illustrating the percentage change in tourism revenue for four countries from 2010 to 2015.

Discuss the trends in tourism revenue for each country.

Highlight any significant increases or decreases.

Compare the overall performance of these countries over the period.

Submitted Answer

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This graph illustrates the variation of the percentage of tourism income in the first five years of the second decade in the 21st century for the most developed countries in the world.

Overall,

USA

was

remained

at the highest earner from tourism throughout the period, while Australia was the consistently lowest earner.

In 2010, USA had a revenue change of 5% while others

remained

at 4%, 3% and 2% for France, China and Australia respectively. Between 2010 and 2012,

in USA

, saw a steady

increase of

percentage, averaging an annual rise of 1% per year. During the first 3 years, France and China have fluctuated percentage variation, and saw a slight growth similarly for two countries until China surpassed France in the 2015.

Tourism growth in France fluctuated over the first 3 years, while its growth keep steady in subsequent years.

despite

this, Australia had moderate growth of tourism income during

first

2 years and

remained

at 4% for next 1 year. For the following

years

Australia achieved

resurgence

tourism

sector but

remained

at last with compared to the others.

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Total Errors	17
Grammatical range and accuracy	10
Lexical resource	2
Coherence & cohesion	3
Task response	2