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The response provides a clear overview of the data, but there are several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that affect clarity. The task is generally achieved, but the coherence and cohesion could be improved with better organization and transitions.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 6.0 |
| Total Errors | 10 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4 | |
| Lexical resource | 1 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Writing Task
#Environmental Issues
#Bar Chart
Analyze the bar chart depicting the percentage of renewable energy usage in different European countries in 2021.
Discuss the overall distribution of renewable energy usage across the countries.
Highlight any countries with notable increases or declines in renewable energy usage.
Compare the renewable energy usage between the highest and lowest countries.
Submitted Answer
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This given bar chart illustrates the usage of renewable energy in five European countries (Germany, France, Italy, Spain, and Sweden) in 2021. Overall, Sweden has the highest position among all of the five countries, while Italy has a fewer percentage on renewable energy usage.
In detail, Sweden has about 55% making it the highest energy usage countries, followed by Spain with 50 percent of usage making it the second larger of energy usage. Furthermore, Germany earned the third position with a percentage around 45 %.
Moreover, France
are
in the fourth position with less than a half of forth with approximately 35 %. Lastly, Italy has the lowest position out of all countries with only a fifth (30%) making it the lowest among all. It is shown that Sweden has a double and a half portion more of energy usage comparing
to Italy
who is the lowest out of all.