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The response provides a general overview of the data but lacks precision in some areas, such as the incorrect repetition of New York's 2020 price. Grammar and vocabulary are adequate but could benefit from more variety and accuracy. Coherence and cohesion are maintained, though transitions between ideas could be smoother.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 8 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 1 | |
| Lexical resource | 1 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Writing Task
#Housing
#Bar Chart
The bar chart compares the average cost per square meter of residential property in five major cities around the world for the years 2017 and 2020.
Compare the cost per square meter in 2017 and 2020 for each city.
Identify which city experienced the most significant change.
Discuss any general trends or patterns in the data.
Submitted Answer
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This diagram illustrates the average price of residential property per square meter for year 2017 and 2020 between New York, London, Tokyo, Paris, and Berlin. Starting from the highest average, which is New York. In the year of 2017 the cost was 12.000 for each square meter. While in the 2020, we see a rise in cost to 12.000. This surge of price also happens in other countries like Tokyo, Paris, and Berlin. Surprisingly, London, with the second-highest average, has a downfall from 10.000 to 9.500. This decrease in cost is very unlikely since the other countries are rising. Tokyo with the price of 8.000 in 2017, for the year 2020 it also has a rise of price same as New York with a difference of 500. This 500 difference in price also happens to Berlin as the holder of the lowest average price out of all the countries mentioned, with 7.000 in the year 2017. Paris, on the other hand, has the lowest fluctuation. In 2017, Paris cost for residential was 9.000. While in 2020, the cost is 9.200, making it the lowest price difference of all with just 200.