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The response provides a basic overview of the data but lacks clarity and precision in language. Grammatical errors and limited vocabulary affect coherence and task achievement, while data interpretation is mostly accurate but not well-explained.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 21 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 9 | |
| Lexical resource | 6 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 3 |
Writing Task
#Environmental Issues
#Bar Chart
Analyze the bar chart depicting the percentage of renewable energy usage in different European countries in 2021.
Discuss the overall distribution of renewable energy usage across the countries.
Highlight any countries with notable increases or declines in renewable energy usage.
Compare the renewable energy usage between the highest and lowest countries.
Submitted Answer
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This bar chart
illustrate
the percentage of renewable
energy usage in different european
countries in 2021. The countries are Germany, France, Italy, Spain, Sweden.Overall, the energy usage percentage go
upto
60% total. The Sweden has use
the most renewable
energy resourse
among all. However, Italy has use
the most lowest
renewable
energy resource
.Between these two countries, Germany has
use
the power of renewable
resource almost 45% in 2021. Comparing to the Spain has use
the resource 50%, and France has use
almost 35%.In 2021, Sweden has
use
the most power of this resource, and lowest among all is Italy.