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The response provides a basic comparison of transportation modes in Paris and Berlin, but lacks clarity and precision in language. Grammatical errors and limited vocabulary affect coherence and task achievement, while data interpretation is mostly accurate but not comprehensive.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 28 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 12 | |
| Lexical resource | 10 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 3 |
Writing Task
#Transportation
#Pie Chart
Analyze the transportation mode shares in Paris and Berlin in 2022.
Compare the distribution of different transportation modes in both cities.
Highlight any significant patterns or irregularities.
Discuss potential reasons for these observations.
Paris
Berlin
Submitted Answer
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This Pie Charts
illustarate
the analysis mode of transportation shared between two cities, i.e. Paris and Berlin in 2022.in both cities Metro mode of transportation
were
more significant as compared to others transportation
i.e
Metro proportion 45.0% in paris
and 30.0% in Berlin.Others
mode
of transportaion
like Bus, Cars were more usage in Berlin as compared to Paris,i.e
Bus 25% in berlin
and 15% in paris
,Cars 25% in berlin
and 20% in paris
.Least usage of
biycle
and walking mode of transportaion
were equally usage
i.e
10%.therefore
we
concluded that Metro mode of transportation were
more used in both cities.