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The response provides a basic comparison of agricultural sectors in Nigeria and Kenya, but lacks detailed analysis and clarity. Grammatical errors and limited vocabulary usage affect the overall coherence and task achievement.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 16 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6 | |
| Lexical resource | 4 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 3 |
Question
Kenya
Nigeria
The pie charts depict the proportion of different agricultural sectors in the GDP of five African countries (Nigeria, Kenya, Egypt, Ethiopia, and South Africa) in 2019.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
Make comparisons where relevant.
Identify any notable trends or irregularities.
#Agriculture
#Pie Chart
Submitted Answer
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These pie charts show the difference in agricultural sectors between two African countries, Nigeria and Kenya.
The leading sector in both countries is taken by crop farming, while the smallest given is fisheries. As
beeing
a bigger country itself, Nigeria has higher
percent of each category.Being
main
trend in Nigeria and Kenya, the percentage of crop farming is 40% and 35%, respectively. Next
sector is livestock farming, which is right under a quarter in Nigeria and exactly 25% in Kenya.The smaller agricultural sectors are
unsurprisingly
forestry and fisheries due to the weather conditions in countries`s
territories. Kenya outdoes Nigeria here
having slightly higher percents
in forestry - 20%, whilst Nigeria is right above 10% mark in fisheries. There are also unnamed activities data being 10% equal and the smallest sector in either Nigeria and Kenya.