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The response provides a basic comparison of housing demand in Toronto and Vancouver, but lacks depth in data analysis and contains grammatical errors. Improved coherence and a wider range of vocabulary would enhance the overall quality.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 20 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6 | |
| Lexical resource | 8 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 3 |
Writing Task
#Housing
#Pie Chart
The pie charts below illustrate the housing demand in Toronto and Vancouver in 2023.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
Make comparisons where relevant.
Toronto
Vancouver
Submitted Answer
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These pie charts illustrate the comparing proportion of housing demands between two
cities i.e.
Toronto and Vancouver in 2023,showing the distribution demand
in different variety of option
like appartement
,detached
houses,semi
detached
houses,terrace houses and others.A key difference is that in
Vancouver
apartments
make up
a larger proportion of the demand compared to Toronto , where detached
houses are less in demand.Rest of option
semi
detached
houses,terrace houses and others are same demanding in both cities, 15%,10%,10%.In conclusion, the housing demand in 2023 shows a preference for
apartments
in both cities.