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The response provides a basic comparison of transportation modes in Paris and Berlin, but lacks depth and precision in data interpretation. Grammatical errors and limited vocabulary usage affect clarity and coherence, while the task achievement is hindered by insufficient detail and analysis.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 24 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 10 | |
| Lexical resource | 8 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 3 |
Writing Task
#Transportation
#Pie Chart
Analyze the transportation mode shares in Paris and Berlin in 2022.
Compare the distribution of different transportation modes in both cities.
Highlight any significant patterns or irregularities.
Discuss potential reasons for these observations.
Paris
Berlin
Submitted Answer
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These Pie Charts illustrate the distribution of modes of transportation shared between two cities, i.e. Paris and Berlin in 2022.
In Both
Cities
Metro is more
significant mode of transportation as compared to others transportation, i.e
accounting for 45.0% in paris
and 30.0% in Berlin.Others modes of
transportaion
such as Bus, Cars were more used in Berlin as compared to Paris,i.e
Bus 25% in berlin
and 15% in paris
,Cars 25% in berlin
and 20% in paris
.Biycle and walking had
Least
usage, each accounting for i.e
10%.Therefore we can
concluded
that the Metro is more used of mode of transportation in both cities."