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The response provides a basic description of the pie charts but lacks formal structure and contains several grammatical errors. The task achievement is limited by the lack of detailed analysis and comparison between the two cities' dietary preferences.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 29 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5 | |
| Lexical resource | 16 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Writing Task
#Health and Fitness
#Pie Chart
Describe the pie charts showing the distribution of different dietary preferences among adults in Tokyo and Paris, expressed in percentages.
Compare the dietary preferences between the two cities.
Highlight any notable trends or patterns.
Discuss the potential cultural influences on these preferences.
Paris
Tokyo
Submitted Answer
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There are 2 Pie charts
showing
the data of two different countries
Tokyo and Paris, to show
the how
much people are Vegetarian, Vegan Pescatarian and Omnivore and other people.1st
lets
talk about the Tokyo. In
tokyo
15% people are Vegetarian
thst
is
showing
up with blue
color
i the pie chart, Vegan are 10% that is
howing
up in chart with Orange
color
, 20% are Pescatatrian that is
showing
up with Orange
color
in the chart, 50% are Omnivore
showing
up with Red
color
, And 5% are those who have different choices.
Now
lets
talk about the Paris. In Paris 20% people are Vegetarian
thst
is
showing
up with blue
color
i the pie chart, Vegan are 15% that is
howing
up in chart with Orange
color
, 15% are Pescatatrian that is
showing
up with Orange
color
in the chart, 45% are Omnivore
showing
up with Red
color
, And 5% are those who have different choices.
These Pie charts are to make differentiate between both countries and choices.