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The response provides a basic overview of the crime rate distribution in five major US cities for 2018 and 2022, but lacks clarity and precision in data interpretation. Grammatical errors and informal language reduce the overall coherence and formality of the text.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 33 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 12 | |
| Lexical resource | 16 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
2018
2022
The pie charts show the distribution of crime rates in five major cities in the USA for the years 2018 and 2022.
Compare the crime rates in the five cities between 2018 and 2022.
Identify which city had the highest crime rate in each year.
Discuss any noticeable changes in crime rates over the given period.
#Crime Rates
#Pie Chart
Submitted Answer
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The two pie charts
illustrates
the crime rate in five major cities in the USA for the years 2018 and 2022.overall, the five cities with the highest crime rates in the
usa
in both the years were New York, Chicago, LA, houston
and phonenix
. new york
remained with one of the highest crime rates in both years. in
2022 chicago
and houston
also joined the top in 2022. on
the other hand
LA reduced its crime rates.in 2018,
new york
was the leading city with the highest crime rate in the usa
with about 30%. los
angles had a quater
of the total crime rate. chicago
, houston
and phonenix
had 20%, 15% and 10% crime rate respectively.0n the other hand, in 2022,
new york
's crime rate a decreased where as chicago
's crime rate had increased, where both had an equal share of 25% each. on
the other hand, los angels
also decreased its crime rates, but houston
experienced an increase, with 20% each. the
crime rate in phonenix
remained the same (10%)