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6.5
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09 Apr 25, 17:00
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The response accurately describes the transportation choices in Toronto and Vancouver, with clear comparisons. However, minor grammatical errors and slightly limited vocabulary range affect the overall quality.
Overall score6.5
Grammatical range and accuracy5.0
Lexical resource7.0
Coherence & cohesion7.0
Task response7.0
Total Errors13
Grammatical range and accuracy6
Lexical resource3
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response1

Writing Task

#Transportation
#Pie Chart
Evaluate the transportation choices in Toronto and Vancouver in 2022.
Compare the proportion of each transportation mode in both cities.
Analyze any notable trends or anomalies in the data.
Discuss reasons that might explain these trends.

Toronto

Vancouver

Submitted Answer

Words163|Paragraphs3
English:UK English
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The two pie charts illustrate the transportation choices between Toronto and Vancouver in 2022. It is measured in percentages. Overall, it can be seen that
subway
was the main choice of transportation in both countries.
To begin, the percentage of usage of the Subway in Toronto is 40%, while Vancouver had a 10% less usage with 30%. Buses are the second frequent choice for
transportation
coming in at 25% for Toronto and 30% for Vancouver. Similarly, in relation to buses, cars have almost an identical number with Toronto at 20% and Vancouver at 25%.
However, while the percentage of usage for the other three
type
of vehicle were different between countries, they were equal in
bicycle
and
walking
at 10% and 5% respectfully.
Walking
is the least popular choice
amongst
the
others
while subways are the opposite. This could reason from public transportations having a faster commute time than
walking
. In addition, rather than
walking
, it is more convenient to ride the subway .

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