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The response provides a clear comparison of greenhouse gas emissions in Australia and India, with accurate data interpretation. However, the analysis could be more detailed, and the vocabulary could be more varied to enhance clarity and engagement.

Overall score	6.5
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Lexical resource	7.0
Coherence & cohesion	7.0
Task response	5.0

Writing Task

#Climate Change

#Pie Chart

Review the pie charts illustrating the sources of greenhouse gas emissions in 2020 for Australia and India.

Compare the distribution of emissions sources between Australia and India.

Identify which country has a higher percentage of emissions from agriculture.

Discuss the implications of the differences in the energy sector emissions.

India

Australia

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The two given pie charts exhibit the sources of greenhouse gas emissions in Australia and India during the year 2020.

At a glance, you can see that Energy is the highest resource of greenhouse gas emissions in

Australia

occupying half of the country's emissions. This is then preceded by Agriculture and Land Use representing 15% for each sector, followed by Industrial Processes and Waste taking up an accumulated 20% of the country's total. Similarly, India's emissions also predominantly comes from Energy

which

takes up almost two-thirds of the third-world country's greenhouse gases, with Agriculture coming in second.

From here, It can be observed that Indian Agriculture is more significant in contributing to greenhouse gas emissions than that of Australia as it accounts for a quarter of emissions in the country, a 10% advantage over that of Australia. Likewise, Energy is also more prominent in releasing harmful gases in India than in Australia. This could imply that Australia's energy sector applies more efficient systems to reduce the

dispertion

of toxic chemicals in comparison to India.

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India

Australia

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