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The response accurately describes the data and highlights key differences between Toronto and Rome's cultural participation. However, there are minor grammatical errors and some awkward phrasing that affect clarity and coherence.
| Overall score | 7.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 7.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 7.0 | |
| Task response | 8.0 |
| Total Errors | 14 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4 | |
| Lexical resource | 5 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 1 |
Writing Task
#Cultural Participation
#Pie Chart
The pie charts illustrate the cultural participation in various activities in Toronto and Rome for the year 2022.
Examine the differences in cultural participation between Toronto and Rome.
Identify which activities had the highest and lowest participation in each city.
Discuss any notable trends or patterns in the data.
Rome
Toronto
Submitted Answer
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The two charts show the difference in overall percentage of every cultural participation in both Toronto and Rome. From the charts, it is shown that the two cities have different largest cultural participation and the
exact same
portion of participants for the lowest one in the year 2022. Theatre has the largest participation for
Toronto with 30% and concerts, with the same percentage, is the largest one in Rome. On the other hand, dance performances with 10% have become the activity that has the lowest number of participation in both cities in the year of 2022.Furthermore, every
activies
in both cities have
different number of
participants, except fot
art exhibitions and dance performances. Both in Toronto and Rome, they have percisely
the same percentage, which is 15% and 10%. In contrast, participants in theatre, concerts, and museums in both cities all differ from each other. For theatre, Toronto has 30% while Rome has 25%, concerts in Toronto has 20% and the one in Rome has 30%. Lastly, museums have 25% participations in Toronto while in Rome, it has 20%.