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The response provides a basic overview of the data but contains several grammatical errors and lacks clarity in some parts. The task achievement is limited due to inaccuracies in data interpretation and insufficient coverage of trends.
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| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
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| Year | Netherlands | Denmark | Germany | China | USA |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| 2015 | 1200000 | 900000 | 800000 | 1500000 | 700000 |
| 2016 | 1250000 | 950000 | 850000 | 1600000 | 750000 |
| 2017 | 1300000 | 1000000 | 900000 | 1700000 | 800000 |
| 2018 | 1350000 | 1050000 | 950000 | 1800000 | 850000 |
| 2019 | 1400000 | 1100000 | 1000000 | 1900000 | 900000 |
| 2020 | 1450000 | 1150000 | 1050000 | 2000000 | 950000 |
The table below presents the number of bicycles sold in five countries over a period of six years from 2015 to 2020.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
Make comparisons where relevant.
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The table shows the amount of bicycles
disposted
in different countries between 2015 and 2020.Overall, in year 2020 had higher amount of bicycles
sold
thoughout
the year period. With various of countries sold
the bicycles, a country that stand out and got highest
number of sell of bicycle was China and followed up by Netherlands
, Denmark, Germany, anmd
USA. Compared
to 2015, USA was the least.Over the period, China
consummed
2000000 of bicycles sold
in 2020 and 1900000 in 2019, while USA
had sold
950000 and 900000 between year 2020 and 2019. This illustrate
that China was a sharp increase of sold
out of bicycle products, compared
among the countries.The table chart reveals that the amount of bicycles
sold
in 2015 had the least amount, compared
to 2020. USA got 700000, while Netherland sold
approximately 1200000 which is smallest
amount. However, from 2015 to 2020, USA was a slight increase, compared
to China was a sharp rise.