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The response provides a basic overview of the data but lacks precision in data interpretation and contains several grammatical errors. Improved coherence and more accurate data representation would enhance the overall quality.
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Writing Task
#Cultural Participation
#Table
The table below provides information on the number of people visiting museums in five different cities around the world from 2014 to 2019.
Summarize the main trends in museum visits in each city.
Compare the changes in visitor numbers across the cities.
Identify any notable fluctuations or patterns over the six years.
| Year | New York | London | Tokyo | Sydney | Berlin |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| 2014 | 500000 | 450000 | 300000 | 200000 | 250000 |
| 2015 | 520000 | 460000 | 310000 | 210000 | 260000 |
| 2016 | 540000 | 470000 | 320000 | 220000 | 270000 |
| 2017 | 560000 | 480000 | 330000 | 230000 | 280000 |
| 2018 | 580000 | 490000 | 340000 | 240000 | 290000 |
| 2019 | 600000 | 500000 | 350000 | 250000 | 300000 |
Submitted Answer
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The table reports
the the
number of people visiting museum
in five different citities
around the world between 2014 to 2019
.Overall, it can be observed that New York has secured that largest number of visiting tourist over a decade and although other countries followed the same trend, Berlin has
least
number of people visiting for the museum visits.In the year 2014,New york and Berlin has secured 5 thousand and 45 thousand,it has then gradually
increased
in the following year. Although Tokyo,sydney
and Berlin started off with lesser no. of incoming tourist visits in
the museum in the same year 2014, these countres
saw similar
pattern of increasing
number of tourist inflow.The inflow of visits has peaked
upto
6000 in 2019 in New york, the London has increased
exactly 5 thousand. The other three countries
Tokyo,sidney
and Berlin got 35 thousand, 25 thousand and,
30 thousand respectively.In conclusion,it can be stated the over the decade the number of museum visitation has
increased
regardless of any cities included.