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01 Apr 25, 07:33

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The response provides a basic overview of the data but lacks depth in analysis and clarity in structure. Grammatical errors and limited vocabulary usage affect the overall coherence and task achievement.

Overall score	6.0
Grammatical range and accuracy	6.0
Lexical resource	6.0
Coherence & cohesion	6.0
Task response	5.0

Writing Task

#Health and Fitness

#Table

Interpret the data on the average annual spending on fitness and health clubs per person in different regions from 2015 to 2020.

Summarize the key trends.

Compare the spending between regions.

Highlight any notable changes or patterns.

Year	North America (USD)	Europe (USD)	Asia (USD)	South America (USD)
2015	300	250	150	100
2016	320	260	160	110
2017	340	270	170	120
2018	360	280	180	130
2019	380	290	190	140
2020	400	300	200	150

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The table provides information on the annual proportion that individual spent on their fitness and health clubs in four continents, namely, North America, Europe, Asia, South America. The data illustrates the information from the year 2015 to 2020.

Overall, North America, is the leading on the annual spending, followed by, Europe and third is Asia, and least in the provided data is South America.

In 2015, North America, is the highest based on the given data, which is 300 USD. Also, the second in the data is Europe, which is 250 USD and the third is Asia, which is 150 USD and the least in the year 2015 is South America. By comparison, North America, and Europe, have 50 USD differences. Whereas, Asia and South America are also had 50 USD differences.

In addition, North America, increased 20 USD per year While, Europe, Asia, South America, increased 10 USD per year. In 2020,

North America, is the leading with 400 USD and the second is Europe, with 300 USD and the third is Asia, which 200 and the least in the final year is South America, which 150. It can be seen that North America is the leading in the annual spending on fitness and health clubs per individual.

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