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The response provides a general overview of the data but contains inaccuracies in data interpretation and lacks clarity in some parts. The grammar and vocabulary are adequate, but there are some errors and limited variety in sentence structures.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 11 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5 | |
| Lexical resource | 1 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
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| Country | Agriculture (2018) | Agriculture (2020) | Industry (2018) | Industry (2020) | Domestic (2018) | Domestic (2020) |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Italy | 50 | 48 | 30 | 32 | 20 | 20 |
| Spain | 60 | 62 | 25 | 23 | 15 | 15 |
| Poland | 40 | 42 | 35 | 33 | 25 | 25 |
| Sweden | 30 | 28 | 40 | 42 | 30 | 30 |
The table below depicts the percentage of total water usage allocated to different sectors in four European countries in 2018 and 2020.
Summarize the changes in the percentage of water usage for each sector in the given countries.
Compare the data between 2018 and 2020.
Highlight any significant shifts or stable patterns in water allocation.
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The table illustrates the proportions of total water utilization assigned to various segments in 2018 and 2020 in four European countries: Italy, Poland, Spain, and Sweden. Overall, it can be observed that agriculture is the highest sector of water usage percentage in all countries in 2018 and 2020.
Spain and Poland demonstrate an increase of 2% in agriculture over two years. Therefore, Spain leads with the highest percentage of 60 in 2018, and 62 in 2020 in agriculture, and Poland places second with 40% in 2018 and 42% in 2010. Conversely, Italy and Sweden show a decline of 2% from 2018 to 2020, with Italy starting at 50% in 2018, reaching to 48% in 2020 and Sweden beginning with 30% in 2018, decreasing to 38% in 2020. Although Sweden reflects the lowest percentage in the agriculture sector, it ranks
the first with
greatest
percentage in the Industry sector in both 2018 and 2020. It indicates an increase of 2% from 2018 to 2020.Similarly, Italy's percentage in the industry segment saw a growth from 30% in 2018 to 32% in 2020. In contrast, Poland and Spain witnessed a decline of 2% over the given period, with the latter starting with 25% and decreasing to 23%. As for Poland, it detects a percentage of 35% in 2018 and 33% in 2020. Furthermore, Sweden once again leads first with
largest
percentage of 30 in the domestic sector in 2018 and 2020. Consequently, Poland ranks second with 25%, Italy places
third at 20%, and Spain ranks last with the lowest percentage of 15%.However, it is evident that the domestic sector does not articulate any changes or fluctuations from 2018 to 2020 in the Europe region.