IELTS Writing Academic Checker - Sample Band 5
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The response contains some grammatical errors and lacks clarity in data interpretation. While it attempts to cover the trends, it inaccurately describes the data and misses key details, affecting task achievement and coherence.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 4.0 |
| Total Errors | 11 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 1 | |
| Lexical resource | 4 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
Examine the education levels from 2012 to 2022 in the regions of North America, Europe, Asia, and South America.
Provide an overview of the trends for each region.
Identify any periods of significant growth or decline.
Compare the trends across the regions.
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The table illustrates the percentages of people who completed
secondary
and tertiary
education in North America, Europe, Asia, and South America between 2012 and 2022.Overall, both
secondary
and
tertiary
education completion rates generally
rose
across all regions during this period, with North America and Europe maintaining the highest percentages in
tertiary
education, while Asia and South America showed more moderate growth, especially in
tertiary
education.
In 2012, North America led in
tertiary
education completion with 45% of the population, increasing to 60% by 2022. Europe followed closely, starting at 40% and reaching 55% in 2022. Both regions also showed high secondary
education rates, with North America rising
from 85% in 2012 to 90% in 2022, and Europe increasing from 80% to 88% over the same period.Asia and South America experienced notable improvements, though starting from lower bases. Asia’s
tertiary
education rate grew from 20% in 2012 to 35% in 2022, while secondary
education rose
from 65% to 78%. In South America, tertiary
education completion increased from 15% to 30%, and secondary
education rose
from 60% to 75% by 2022.In summary, education levels in all regions improved between 2012 and 2022, with North America and Europe consistently showing the highest completion rates. Although Asia and South America started with lower percentages, both regions made substantial progress, particularly in
secondary
education.