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5.5
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09 Apr 25, 14:49
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The response provides a general overview of the crime rate trends but lacks precision in data interpretation and contains grammatical errors. Improved coherence and a wider range of vocabulary would enhance the clarity and depth of the analysis.
Overall score5.5
Grammatical range and accuracy5.0
Lexical resource6.0
Coherence & cohesion6.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors12
Grammatical range and accuracy6
Lexical resource1
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response2

Writing Task

#Crime Rates
#Table
Analyze the provided Table data on crime rates in different countries for the years 2010, 2012, 2014, 2016, 2018, and 2020.
Highlight the countries with the highest and lowest crime rates.
Examine any significant changes over the period.
Discuss any irregularities or unexpected trends.
Country201020122014201620182020
United States7.57.37.16.96.86.7
Canada65.85.95.75.65.5
United Kingdom44.14.24.34.44.5
Australia5.55.45.35.25.15
Germany33.13.23.33.43.5

Submitted Answer

Words169|Paragraphs3
English:UK English
Global Issues:
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
The table illustrates the percentage of crime rate in various country from the year 2010 to 2020 with 2 year gap in each year. It is evident that whereas Canada, United States and Australia had a marked decrease in crime rate, the other showed a rise.
To begin,
United
States(from 7.5% to 6.7%) had the biggest decline
of
crime rate from 2010 to 2020 with a significant 0.8% decrease. In comparison, Canada(from 6% to 5.5%) and Australia(from 5.5% to 5%) fell short with just 0.5% of an overall drop.
United states
and Australia showed a steady decline every 2 years averaging to around 0.1 drop whilst Canada had a sudden incline in 2014(from 5.8% to 5.9%).
However, while the other three countries share a falling crime rate, the opposite was true with Germany and
United
Kingdom. Both countries had inflation of 0.5% crime rate from 2010 to 2020, with a
gradual gradual
each 2 years.

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