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The response provides a general overview of the data but lacks precision in data interpretation and contains numerous grammatical errors. Improved coherence and a more structured approach to describing trends would enhance clarity and task achievement.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 30 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 8 | |
| Lexical resource | 14 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Writing Task
#Tourism
#Table
The table below represents the percentage of GDP contributed by tourism in five different countries over a six-year span (2015-2020).
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
Make comparisons where relevant.
| Year | Maldives | Greece | Portugal | New Zealand | Canada |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| 2015 | 28.9 | 18.5 | 15.2 | 9.4 | 2.3 |
| 2016 | 30.1 | 19.2 | 16 | 9.7 | 2.5 |
| 2017 | 31.7 | 20.6 | 17.1 | 10.2 | 2.7 |
| 2018 | 33.5 | 21.8 | 18.3 | 10.8 | 3 |
| 2019 | 35.2 | 22.5 | 19 | 11.2 | 3.3 |
| 2020 | 16 | 10.5 | 9.8 | 5.6 | 1.5 |
Submitted Answer
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The table illustrates the percentage of GDP that of that
aa
coutry
has gained by tourism. Amon the five countries that has been presented in this table Maldive tops this list from 2015 to 2020 terms of perscentage
that tourism has contributed
into their GDP. Whereas, tourism in Canadaa has least
contribution in their GDP among the five countries that has been prresented
in this table. In the year 2015
tourism has contributed
28.9 percent in
the GDP of Maldivess whereas tourism has contribytedd
only 2.3 prcent
into
the GDP of Canada. Contribution of tourism into the GDP of the Maldives has ket
on increasing since 2015 till
2019 after which the contribution of tourism into their GDP has decreased to 16 percent which is even lower than 2015. However, Maldives is not the only country where contribution of tourism to their GDP haas
decreased, all the five countries presented in the chart has been affected. Despite this among the five countries Maldive has seen the most drastic decrease in percentage of tourism
contribtion
into their GDP compared to 2015 whereas, the GDP of Canada has been
least
affected due to the
decrease of
contribution of tourism into their GDP.
Overall
it can be concluded that countries
like Maldives
and Greece where tourism has most
contributed
into the GDP has been most affected in the year 2020 compared to countries like Canada, Newzeland, and
portugal
where tourism has least
contributed
into their GDP.