IELTS Writing Academic Checker - Sample Band 5.5

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5.5
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The response provides a general overview of the data but lacks precision in describing trends and comparisons. Grammatical errors and limited vocabulary range affect clarity and coherence, while some data points are inaccurately reported.
Overall score5.5
Grammatical range and accuracy5.0
Lexical resource6.0
Coherence & cohesion6.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors17
Grammatical range and accuracy6
Lexical resource6
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response2
Question
YearSoftware DeveloperSystem AnalystProject ManagerIT Support
201330000350004500025000
201432000360004600026000
201534000370004700027000
201636000380004800028000
201738000390004900029000
201840000400005000030000
The table provides the average income levels (in USD) for different job roles in the IT industry in India from 2013 to 2018.
Summarize the income trends for each job role.
Highlight any significant increases or decreases.
Compare the income levels across the job roles.
#Income Levels
#Table
Submitted Answer
English:UK English
Words:172
Paragraphs:4
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Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
The table illustrates the average income from 2013 to 2018 for distinct job holders in the information technology industry in
india
.
Overall, the project manager remained the highest paying job and IT support job roles
got
minimum
salery
. Software
developer
faced double increase in income as compared to the other three job roles,
getting
a raise of about 2000 every year. But, still software
developer
and system
analyst
got
the same pay in 2018.
Although,
initial
salery
of
software
developer was 30000 in 2013, but it became 40000 in 2018 because of the double increase in pay comparatively to the other three and ultimately the pay became equal to system analyst.
Project manager
got
the highest income of 45000 in 2013, and it remained the highest paying job in 2018 as well, facing an increase of 1000
everyear
and reaching up to 50000. While, IT support was the least paying job in 2013, and it remained the job
getting
the least income even in 2018, facing a raise from 25000 to 30000.

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