IELTS Writing Academic Checker - Sample Band 5.5
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5.5
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The response provides a general overview of the data but lacks precision in describing trends and comparisons. Grammatical errors and limited vocabulary range affect clarity and coherence, while some data points are inaccurately reported.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 17 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6 | |
| Lexical resource | 6 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
| Year | Software Developer | System Analyst | Project Manager | IT Support |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 2013 | 30000 | 35000 | 45000 | 25000 |
| 2014 | 32000 | 36000 | 46000 | 26000 |
| 2015 | 34000 | 37000 | 47000 | 27000 |
| 2016 | 36000 | 38000 | 48000 | 28000 |
| 2017 | 38000 | 39000 | 49000 | 29000 |
| 2018 | 40000 | 40000 | 50000 | 30000 |
The table provides the average income levels (in USD) for different job roles in the IT industry in India from 2013 to 2018.
Summarize the income trends for each job role.
Highlight any significant increases or decreases.
Compare the income levels across the job roles.
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Submitted Answer
English:
Words:172
Paragraphs:4
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The table illustrates the average income from 2013 to 2018 for distinct job holders in the information technology industry in
india
.Overall, the project manager remained the highest paying job and IT support job roles
got
minimum salery
. Software developer
faced double increase in income as compared to the other three job roles, getting
a raise of about 2000 every year. But, still software developer
and system analyst
got
the same pay in 2018.Although,
initial
salery
of software
developer was 30000 in 2013, but it became 40000 in 2018 because of the double increase in pay comparatively to the other three and ultimately the pay became equal to system analyst.Project manager
got
the highest income of 45000 in 2013, and it remained the highest paying job in 2018 as well, facing an increase of 1000 everyear
and reaching up to 50000. While, IT support was the least paying job in 2013, and it remained the job getting
the least income even in 2018, facing a raise from 25000 to 30000.