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The response provides a general overview of the data but lacks precision in data interpretation and contains grammatical errors. Improved coherence and more accurate data referencing would enhance the overall quality.

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Lexical resource	6.0
Coherence & cohesion	6.0
Task response	5.0

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#Energy Consumption

#Table

The table displays the electricity consumption (in GWh) for urban and rural areas in Brazil, Mexico, and Argentina from 2010 to 2020.

Describe the electricity consumption trends for urban and rural areas in each country.

Compare the electricity usage between urban and rural areas within and across the countries.

Identify any significant changes or patterns in the data over the decade.

Year	Brazil Urban	Brazil Rural	Mexico Urban	Mexico Rural	Argentina Urban	Argentina Rural
2010	500	200	400	150	300	100
2012	520	210	420	160	320	110
2014	540	220	440	170	340	120
2016	560	230	460	180	360	130
2018	580	240	480	190	380	140
2020	600	250	500	200	400	150

Submitted Answer

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The table illustrates electricity consumption rate (in GWh) between

urban

and

rural

areas for three difference countries from 2010 to 2020. Overall, it is evident that both areas in all countries exhibit an

increase of

electricity consumption rate.

To begin, it is conveyed that Brazil

have

the highest electricity output in both the

urban

and

rural

areas in comparison to the other three countries. In hindsight, all

urban

areas show a significant

influction

of electricity expenditure. Brazil started from 500 Gwh in 2010 and ended with 600GWh, while the

rural

area indicated a 50 Gwh rise from 200 Gwh to 250 Gwh. Following the same pattern, Mexico and Argentina had a gradual incline of 100 Gwh in the

urban

are, while the

rural

are revealed to have 50 GWh. Interestingly, all three countries mirror each other in the growth of the energy consumption, with all three countries steadily increase 20 GWh each two year for the

urban

areas and 10GWh each two years for the

rural

areas.

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Total Errors	13
Grammatical range and accuracy	3
Lexical resource	4
Coherence & cohesion	4
Task response	2