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IELTS Writing Academic Checker - Sample Band 6

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6 | IELTS Writing Academic Report Sample Band 6 (Academic Training)

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09 Apr 25, 14:21
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The response provides a general overview of the data but contains several grammatical errors and lacks clarity in some parts. While the main trends are identified, the conclusion inaccurately states that London had the most significant increase, which is incorrect.
Overall score6.0
Grammatical range and accuracy6.0
Lexical resource6.0
Coherence & cohesion6.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors16
Grammatical range and accuracy7
Lexical resource2
Coherence & cohesion4
Task response3

Writing Task

#Transportation
#Table
The table below shows the average commuting time (in minutes) for workers in various cities around the world in 2010 and 2020.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
Make comparisons where relevant.
City20102020
New York4045
London3538
Paris3035
Tokyo5055
Beijing6070
Mumbai4550

Submitted Answer

Words148|Paragraphs2
English:UK English
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Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
The table illustrates average commuting time for workers from different cities, calculated by minutes, from 2010 to 2020 (with a
10 year
gap).
Overal
, the data shows an increase in the average commuting time from all the cities.
To begin, Beijing (from 60 to 70) had the biggest growth between the other cities, with a 10
minutes
difference
between 2010 to 2020
. In comparison, London (from 35 to 38) had the lowest amount of
increase
with just 3 minutes of time deviation from the
10 year
data. Between them, Paris (from 30 to 35), Tokyo (from 50 to 55), Mumbai (from 45 to 50) and New York (from 40 to 45) shared the same time escalation, which is 5 minutes. In conclusion, even though the number of increase from each city varies, there
were
an inflation of commuting time for workers with the most significant surging from London.

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