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IELTS Writing Academic Checker - Sample Band 5

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Writing Academic Report Sample Band 5 (Academic Training)

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The response provides a basic overview of the data but contains several grammatical errors and lacks clarity in some parts. The task achievement is limited as it does not accurately reflect all data points and trends, and the vocabulary is somewhat repetitive.
Overall score5.0
Grammatical range and accuracy5.0
Lexical resource5.0
Coherence & cohesion5.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors42
Grammatical range and accuracy21
Lexical resource15
Coherence & cohesion4
Task response2

Writing Task

#Transportation
#Line Chart
Examine the shifts in the percentage of people using electric vehicles in various European countries from 2012 to 2022.
Summarize the main trends for each country.
Compare the growth rates among the countries.
Identify any significant increases or decreases in usage.

Submitted Answer

Words206|Paragraphs3
English:UK English
Global Issues:
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The table
illustrate
data percentages of people in several European countries who
use
electric
vehicle
from 2012 to 2022. There are four countries that
shows
in the data there are Germany, France, Norway, and Netherland.
The data
shows
there
are
an incline
of
the
persentages
of
using
electric
vehicle
from 2012 to 2022 in Germany, but there
are
a
slightly incline
in 2018 to 2020 from 8
percents
to 25
percents
. In
France
there are constantly incline in 2012 until 2017 , and there are a
slightly increase
in 2018 to 2020 from 7
percents
to 20
percents
people who
using
electric
vehicles. From 2012 to
2020
people
using
electric
vehicles in Norway have a
dramatically increase
form 10
percents
to 70
percents
. In
Netherland
the data explain there are a
highly increase
from 2016 to 2020 from 10
percents
to 40
percents
.
The table
shows
from the data all of several European countries that
shows
in
table
have an increase from 2012 to 2020, there is no country that
have
a decrease that
shows
in the table.
Norway
have
the first place in the biggest
percets
people users of elective vehicles in 2020. France taking the last place from
percets
people
using
elective
vehicle
in 2020.

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