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The response provides a general overview of the data but contains several inaccuracies and lacks clarity in data interpretation. Grammatical errors and limited vocabulary usage affect the overall coherence and task achievement.
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| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
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Writing Task
#Retail and E-commerce
#Table
The table below shows the annual e-commerce expenditure per capita (in USD) for various countries in 2022.
Summarize the expenditure trends for each country.
Compare the per capita expenditure across the countries.
Identify any notable differences or patterns.
| Country | Electronics | Clothing | Groceries | Others |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| USA | 800 | 600 | 400 | 200 |
| UK | 700 | 500 | 450 | 250 |
| Germany | 650 | 550 | 300 | 200 |
| Australia | 750 | 600 | 350 | 300 |
| India | 400 | 300 | 200 | 150 |
| Canada | 700 | 550 | 400 | 250 |
Submitted Answer
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The table
gives
information about yearly e-commerce expenditure per capita
for various countries in four different categories in 2022. Units measured in USD. Overall, as can be seen from the data, in total, the highest
expenses for all countries is elecronics
, while the lowest is others category. Moreover, the using of e-commerce is more popular
in Australia, and less popular
in India. Electronics is popular
in USA
, and the others category's income is remain
stable for all countries.Looking into more detail, the
highest
amount of money spent in the all countries was Electronics with 400 USD. In contrast, the lowest expenses was others catecory
with 130 USD. Furthermore, Australia have the highest
online shop income by 2.000 USD, while India have the lowest income by 1.050 USD. Electronics was popular
in the USA by 800 USD and the highest
income from the other categories in all countries. The expenditure on Others category remain
the same for all countries with average approximately 250 USD.