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The response provides a basic overview of the data but lacks precision and clarity in describing trends. Grammatical errors and limited vocabulary usage affect the overall coherence and task achievement.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 25 | |
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| Lexical resource | 13 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
| Year | UK | India | South Africa |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2015 | 100 | 200 | 150 |
| 2016 | 110 | 210 | 140 |
| 2017 | 120 | 220 | 160 |
| 2018 | 130 | 230 | 170 |
| 2019 | 140 | 240 | 180 |
| 2020 | 150 | 250 | 190 |
The table compares the energy consumption (in PJ) of the commercial sector in the UK, India, and South Africa from 2015 to 2020.
Summarize the energy consumption trends for the commercial sector in each country.
Compare the energy usage patterns among the three countries.
Identify any notable increases or decreases in the data.
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Submitted Answer
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The table
give
information about consumption of the commercial sector. This is analyzed
comparing the values of pj
from 2015 to 2020 in the city like UK, India and South Africa. Let's
start analyzing
trends for each country. We can see, the Uk
increase its value of 10 pj
, each year. Starting from value of 100 pj
and arriving at value og
150 pj
with a steady growth. The India grows gradually, increasing of 10 pj
each year, but as we can see, it has high base values with 200 in 2015 and 250 in 2020. In conclusion
the South Africa in the 2015 has had a value of 150. However, it has had a slight variation in 2015 of 10 pj
and then continue with its gradual growth. Like it's
illustrate
, the three countries behave in different way. In fact
the trends of Uk and India are very similar, but both have had a constant growth. The only difference is the base values from which they start. Instead, the South Africa has had a behavior
variable.