IELTS Writing Academic Checker - Sample Band 5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Writing Academic Report Sample Band 5 (Academic Training)
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The response provides a basic overview of the data but lacks clarity and precision in language. Grammatical errors and awkward phrasing affect readability, while the analysis of trends is not fully developed.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 17 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 8 | |
| Lexical resource | 3 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
| City | 2010 | 2020 |
|---|---|---|
| New York | 40 | 45 |
| London | 35 | 38 |
| Paris | 30 | 35 |
| Tokyo | 50 | 55 |
| Beijing | 60 | 70 |
| Mumbai | 45 | 50 |
The table below shows the average commuting time (in minutes) for workers in various cities around the world in 2010 and 2020.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
Make comparisons where relevant.
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The
table examine
the average time it takes to commute per minute in various cities around the world. Comparing it from 2010 until 2020. It can be highlighted that New York, Paris, Tokyo, and Mumbai have relatively the same amount of commuting time which all of it increased
in the period of time. As London itself only increased
by a tiny bit over the period. Another interesting part is Beijin that has a significant increased
over the period.To begin with,
at
2010 New York, Paris, Tokyo, Mumbai these city
all have one thing in common that is at the end they increased
by 5. Starting with New York at 40 and end it with 45, Paris at 30 and end it with 35, and so on the rest. As London, the commuting time has a different approaches
at 35 at 2010 and 38 at 2020, which doenst
increased
that much. Lastly, Beijing have
the most amount of increased
minute, which is 10 and its double the amount from
the rest of it except London. At the start
which is 2010 at 60 and by the end of 2020 it had 70.