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07 Apr 25, 13:21

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The response effectively summarizes the data, highlighting key trends and changes over the period. However, some inaccuracies in data interpretation and occasional awkward phrasing slightly detract from clarity and precision.

Overall score	6.5
Grammatical range and accuracy	7.0
Lexical resource	7.0
Coherence & cohesion	7.0
Task response	5.0

Writing Task

#Tourism

#Table

The table below shows the number of international tourists visiting five different countries over a six-year period (2015-2020) in millions.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

Make comparisons where relevant.

Year	France	USA	China	Spain	Italy
2015	84.5	77.5	56.9	68.2	50.7
2016	82.6	75.9	59.3	72.4	52.4
2017	86.9	80.1	61.4	75.3	54.2
2018	89.4	79.7	62.9	81.8	58.3
2019	90.5	79.4	65.7	83.7	60.4
2020	40	19.4	30	45	23.5

Submitted Answer

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The table displays international tourist travel among five areas: France, USA, China, Spain, and Italy, and were measured by the number of tourists visiting from other countries from 2015 to 2020. As depicted, it can be blatantly observed that all participating countries experienced a momentous dip in tourism during 2020

most

likely due to the pandemic.

Furthermore, France once maintained its spot as the

most

visited country among the surveyed countries for five consecutive years before eventually being dethroned by Spain in 2020. The latter was able to surpass the former with 5 million tourists. During this time, USA became the least visited destination for tourists, not being able to reach the 20 million-mark.

Beforehand, Italy was once the country with the

most

lacklustre tourism from 2015 to 2019, seeing a large gap

between USA

of more than 20 million visitors every year before the pandemic struck. Another country that managed to stand out in 2020 is China who managed to become the third

most

popular tourist destination with 30 million visitors from being second to the least sought-after travel spot.

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Grammatical range and accuracy	2
Lexical resource	2
Coherence & cohesion	3
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