IELTS Writing Academic Checker - Sample Band 6.5

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6.5
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07 Apr 25, 13:21
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The response effectively summarizes the data, highlighting key trends and changes over the period. However, some inaccuracies in data interpretation and occasional awkward phrasing slightly detract from clarity and precision.
Overall score6.5
Grammatical range and accuracy7.0
Lexical resource7.0
Coherence & cohesion7.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors9
Grammatical range and accuracy2
Lexical resource2
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response2

Writing Task

#Tourism
#Table
The table below shows the number of international tourists visiting five different countries over a six-year period (2015-2020) in millions.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
Make comparisons where relevant.
YearFranceUSAChinaSpainItaly
201584.577.556.968.250.7
201682.675.959.372.452.4
201786.980.161.475.354.2
201889.479.762.981.858.3
201990.579.465.783.760.4
20204019.4304523.5

Submitted Answer

Words183|Paragraphs3
English:UK English
Global Issues:
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Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
The table displays international tourist travel among five areas: France, USA, China, Spain, and Italy, and were measured by the number of tourists visiting from other countries from 2015 to 2020. As depicted, it can be blatantly observed that all participating countries experienced a momentous dip in tourism during 2020
most
likely due to the pandemic.
Furthermore, France once maintained its spot as the
most
visited country among the surveyed countries for five consecutive years before eventually being dethroned by Spain in 2020. The latter was able to surpass the former with 5 million tourists. During this time, USA became the least visited destination for tourists, not being able to reach the 20 million-mark.
Beforehand, Italy was once the country with the
most
lacklustre tourism from 2015 to 2019, seeing a large gap
between USA
of more than 20 million visitors every year before the pandemic struck. Another country that managed to stand out in 2020 is China who managed to become the third
most
popular tourist destination with 30 million visitors from being second to the least sought-after travel spot.

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