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The response provides a basic overview of the employment figures but contains several grammatical errors and lacks coherence. Vocabulary is limited, and some data points are inaccurately reported, affecting task achievement.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 17 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6 | |
| Lexical resource | 6 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Writing Task
#Employment Sectors
#Table
The table details the employment figures (in thousands) in the Retail, Finance, and Construction sectors for five countries in 2021.
Analyze the employment distribution across the three sectors.
Compare the employment figures among the five countries.
Identify any significant trends or outliers in the data.
| Country | Retail (thousands) | Finance (thousands) | Construction (thousands) |
|---|---|---|---|
| USA | 1500 | 1000 | 800 |
| UK | 700 | 600 | 500 |
| Canada | 800 | 500 | 600 |
| Australia | 600 | 400 | 700 |
| India | 2000 | 1500 | 1200 |
Submitted Answer
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The table details indicate the number of employment (in thousands) in the Retail, Finance, and Constrction
sectos
for five nations in 2021. Overall, India has the highest
of the employment figures in every sectors
. In contrast, Australia has the lowest
employement
in the Retail and Finance, and UK has the lowest
employment in the Construction.India has the
most
highest
employment in the Retail, which is 2,000,000 employees. The lowest
employment in every sectors
is 400,000 employees in the Finance sector in Austrlia. USA is the second highest
in every sectors
, which has 1,500,000 people work
in the Retail, 1,000,000 people work
in the Finance and 800,000 people work
in the Construction.The employment figures in Canana are in the middle rank in every
sectors
. It has the highest
of 800,000 people working
in the Retail and the lowest
of 500,000 people working
in the Finance. In addition, in UK, the highest
employment is in the Retail with 700,000 employees and the lowest
is 500,000 employees in the Construction.