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The answer provides a general overview of the changes in sea levels for the selected cities but lacks detailed analysis and specific data points. There are some grammatical errors and inconsistencies in vocabulary usage. The coherence and cohesion could be improved with better organization and clearer transitions.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 18 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 2 | |
| Lexical resource | 11 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
| City | 2000 | 2005 | 2010 | 2015 | 2020 |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Miami | 5 | 7 | 10 | 12 | 15 |
| Venice | 8 | 10 | 12 | 14 | 16 |
| Bangkok | 6 | 8 | 11 | 13 | 17 |
| Shanghai | 7 | 9 | 12 | 15 | 18 |
| Lagos | 4 | 6 | 9 | 11 | 14 |
Discuss the changes in sea levels (in centimeters) for selected coastal cities from 2000 to 2020.
Describe the overall trends in sea level changes for each city.
Identify any cities experiencing rapid changes in sea levels.
Compare the sea level trends among the cities and discuss possible causes for these changes.
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Submitted Answer
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The table depicts the changes in sea levels for five cities, namely ( Miami, Venice, Bangkok, Shanghai and Lagos) between 2000 and 2020.
Overall, the sea levels in all states gradually increased throughout the years, maybe some slower than others
but
it is noticiable
that there is an increase year by year for each city.In 2020, Miami had the highest rate of 15
centimeters
, whilst it received minimal percentage at the beginning of the period in 2000. As far as Venice is concerned, it has shown a very slight improvement of roughly 2 centimeters
each year. This illustrates a more steady and constant trend.With respect to Bangkok, the proportion appears to be unsteady in terms of its increase rate. Sometimes it fluctuates higher with three
centimeters
and other times with four centimeters
.Shanghai projected consistence when it comes to its increase in volumes with 3
centimeters
for most of the years.When it comes to Lagos, it is
noticiable
that the levels fluctuated modestly starting being the lowest with four centimeters
to 14 centimeters
throughout the years.Generally, 2020 received the most rains in Shanghai whilst, 2000 had the least rainfalls in Lagos.