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The response provides a basic overview of population growth trends but lacks clarity and precision in data interpretation. Grammatical errors and awkward phrasing affect readability, while limited vocabulary and cohesion reduce the overall effectiveness of the analysis.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 19 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 9 | |
| Lexical resource | 5 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Writing Task
#Population Growth
#Table
Review the table data on population growth in various regions of the United States over six years.
Explain the population trends for each region.
Identify and discuss any significant shifts in population.
Compare the growth patterns across different regions.
| Year | Northeast | Midwest | South | West |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 2015 | 56.1 | 68.6 | 122.3 | 76.5 |
| 2016 | 56.3 | 68.7 | 123.8 | 77.1 |
| 2017 | 56.4 | 68.9 | 125.2 | 77.7 |
| 2018 | 56.5 | 69 | 126.5 | 78.2 |
| 2019 | 56.6 | 69.1 | 127.9 | 78.7 |
| 2020 | 56.7 | 69.2 | 129.2 | 79.1 |
Submitted Answer
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The table
compare
and contrast
data of population growth between 4 different regions based on direction
of United State from 2015 to 2020. In general, it is easy to observe that all areas gradually improve it's
population over years with the dominance of the South and the West, which is the most notable.Start with the South and the West, which are
2
strongest regions. Although saying that these places were being located the most, it's
not really comparable by
the outstanding number of people from the South. The trend was generally similar, however, from 2015 to 2017, the level of increase was quite different. While the population in the West got only 1.2 expand in 2 years, the South did it nearly doubled of 2.9 with
the same amout
of time. To the end of 2020, the number of people chose to live in the South outperformed the West with more than 2 times.On the other hand,
Midwest
and Northeast's competitiveness seemed to be less tense. Especially, when from 2015 to 2017, they shared the same population growth of 0.3, which was quite average compared to others. The coincidence did not even end in 2020, they did it again with the same growth's speed downed to 0.2 this time. This showed a less number of people paying attention to these regions due to
some reasons.