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The response provides a general overview of water usage trends but lacks detailed analysis and specific data points. Grammatical errors and limited vocabulary range affect clarity and coherence, while the task achievement is hindered by insufficient coverage of all countries and years.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 16 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 7 | |
| Lexical resource | 3 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Writing Task
#Water Usage
#Table
Discuss the water usage patterns in different countries and their changes over three distinct years.
Summarize the water usage in each country for the given years.
Identify any countries with significant increases or decreases in water usage.
Analyze any mixed or fluctuating patterns in the data.
| Country | 2000 (million cubic meters) | 2010 (million cubic meters) | 2020 (million cubic meters) |
|---|---|---|---|
| USA | 1000 | 1100 | 1050 |
| Canada | 800 | 850 | 900 |
| Australia | 700 | 750 | 800 |
| India | 1200 | 1300 | 1400 |
| China | 1500 | 1600 | 1700 |
| Brazil | 1100 | 1150 | 1200 |
Submitted Answer
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The table chart provides data on the patterns of water usage in six different countries and their changes
ove
three given years.Overall, water use
in USA
fluctuated whilst the remaining countries increased. Among all of the countries, China had the greatest starting point and Australia started off with the lowest number.Firstly, the three most dominant
use
of water goes to China with 1500 million cubic
metres, India with 1200 million cubic
metres and Brazil, 1100 million cubic
metres in 2000. The water usage of these three countries grew
over the years.The other three remaining
countries
which are the USA, Canada and Australia
went to the lower group ranging between 700 to 1000
million cubic
meters. Canada and Australia inclined but the United States of America rose by 100 million cubic
metres to 1100 million cubic
metres in 2010 before decreasing to 1050 million cubic
metres at the end of the period