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IELTS Writing Academic Checker - Sample Band 5

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Writing Academic Report Sample Band 5 (Academic Training)

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The response provides a basic overview of the data but lacks detailed analysis and contains several grammatical errors. Improved coherence and a more varied vocabulary would enhance the clarity and depth of the description.
Overall score5.0
Grammatical range and accuracy5.0
Lexical resource5.0
Coherence & cohesion5.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors28
Grammatical range and accuracy16
Lexical resource7
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response2

Writing Task

#Cultural Participation
#Table
The table below provides data on the number of museum visitors in five different countries over a period of five years.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
Make comparisons where relevant.
Country20162017201820192020
USA6062656870
France5557605865
Germany5052555360
Italy4547504855
Spain4042454350

Submitted Answer

Words154|Paragraphs3
English:UK English
Global Issues:
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
The table above shows a number of museum visitors in five different countries from 2016 until 2020, from this we can see there
are
a
reall
comparison in each country over the years.
from the first row, in the USA the number of visitors every year is always raising until it
reach
the
highest
which is 70 people.
whereas
as seems in
france
,
germany
,
italy
and
spain
there are fluctuation visitors in 2019, they are having a down number from the previous year. Also, the table shows that
spain
have
the smallest museum guest
every years
compare
to
other
four
country
.
To sum up, the 4
country
seems
to have
a same patterns
of increased visitors, over five
years
each country may have an 10 addition of visitors from the last year. There are not having a really huge different number over years, the difference may not over than 10 guest in each
years
.

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