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The response effectively summarizes the data, using a range of grammatical structures with few errors. However, the coherence could be improved by better organizing the information, and the lexical resource could be enhanced with more varied vocabulary.
| Overall score | 7.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 8.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 7.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 7.0 | |
| Task response | 7.0 |
| Total Errors | 10 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 3 | |
| Lexical resource | 3 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 1 |
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| Country | Football (%) | Basketball (%) | Tennis (%) | Swimming (%) |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| USA | 45 | 30 | 15 | 40 |
| UK | 40 | 25 | 20 | 35 |
| Australia | 50 | 20 | 25 | 45 |
| Germany | 35 | 15 | 30 | 30 |
| Japan | 20 | 10 | 25 | 50 |
The table below shows the percentage of people participating in various sports activities in five different countries in 2022.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
Compare the differences in participation rates between the countries.
Highlight any significant trends or irregularities.
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Submitted Answer
English:
Words:180
Paragraphs:3
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The table above illustrates the proportion of people engaging in different sports activities in 2022 in five different countries: USA, UK, Australia, Japan, and Germany. Overall, it is evident that the percentages
recorded
for each activity varies in each country.USA reflects its highest percentage, 45%, in football, but displays the
lowest
percentage, 15%, in tennis, which also ranks it the last when compared with all other four countries. Similarly, UK
recorded
its greatest percentage, 40%, in football, but demonstrated its lowest
percentage, 20%, in tennis. Consequently, Australia showed its largest percentage, 50%, in swimming, which is as well the highest percentage in comparison to the percentages recorded
for each country in swimming. Conversely
though, it displays its smallest percentage, 20%, in basketball. As for Germany, it reflects its biggest percentage, 35%, in football, while its lowest
percentage, 15%, is in basketball. In contrast, Japan held and led first with the highest percentage, 50%, in swimming, and recorded
the lowest
percentage of all countries as well, 10%, in basketball.In conclusion, basketball seems the least attractive activity for most countries.