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The response provides a general overview of water usage in Australia and Brazil, but contains several grammatical errors and lacks clarity in some parts. The data is mostly accurate, but the explanation could be more detailed and cohesive.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 19 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 9 | |
| Lexical resource | 4 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 3 |
Question
Brazil
Australia
Analyze the distribution of water usage in different sectors in Australia and Brazil for the year 2021.
Describe the main trends and key features.
Compare the differences and similarities between the two regions.
Identify any significant patterns or anomalies.
#Water Usage
#Pie Chart
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:144
Paragraphs:4
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The provided pie charts show the water usage allocation in different sectors in two different countries in 2021.
As is presented, it is proven that
most of water
usage were allocated to agriculture in whilst the least water usage were on
other
sector
in both countries.As we can see, both of the countries allocated their water to
agriculture
sector for 50% and 45%, respectively. Similarly, the other
sector has 5% of water usage. In Australia, the domestic sector has became
the second highest for one-fifth followed by industrial
sector for 15 percent and public service for 10 percent.On the
other
hand, Brazil
second highest
rate for water usage is domestic sectore
followed by industrial and public service for 25%, 20%, and 5%, respectively. The rate difference between Australia and Brazil is mostly has
5% in every sector except the other
sector.