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The response provides a general overview of the data but contains several grammatical errors and lacks clarity in some parts. The vocabulary is adequate but could be more varied, and the coherence and cohesion could be improved with better organization and linking phrases.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 14 | |
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| Lexical resource | 5 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
China
India
The pie charts show the percentage of different renewable energy sources adopted in China and India in 2022.
Compare the adoption of renewable energy sources in China and India.
Identify any significant differences in the adoption rates.
Discuss any notable trends and their possible implications.
#Technology Adoption
#Pie Chart
Submitted Answer
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The provided pie charts
presents
the rate of different renewable energy sources adopted in China and India in 2022. As a general trend, the greatest proportion of Solar was in China, while the smallest percentage was Biomass. In regard to
India, the highest rate was Solar, Whereas Biomass accounted for the least.In terms of China, exact 40% of it existed in Solar and this figure dropped slightly to about 30% in Wind. In Hydro, the proportion of China
experinced
a minimum fall to nearly one fifth. The numbers for Biomass and Geothermal were quite similar. The rates for both energy sources were below 20%. To be specific, the precetages
of Biomass and Geothermal stood at 5% and 5% respectively.Regarding India, Biomadd and Geothermal were quite similar
and
they had the smallest rates, which occupied exactly 5% for both sources. The Hydero proportion in India witnessed a doubling to around 30%. This figure decreased marginally to just over 30% in Wind. Finally
Solar had the largest rate in India, where it represnted
just under 40%.