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The response provides a general overview of the data but contains several grammatical errors and lacks clarity in some parts. The vocabulary is adequate, but the coherence and cohesion could be improved with better organization and clearer connections between ideas.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 24 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 14 | |
| Lexical resource | 5 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
| Country | Asylum Seekers (Thousands) | Refugees (Thousands) | Total (Thousands) |
|---|---|---|---|
| USA | 200 | 300 | 500 |
| Turkey | 250 | 350 | 600 |
| Germany | 150 | 250 | 400 |
| Canada | 100 | 150 | 250 |
| Sweden | 50 | 100 | 150 |
| Lebanon | 200 | 500 | 700 |
The table represents the number of asylum seekers and refugees in selected countries in 2022.
Summarize the data on asylum seekers and refugees for each country.
Compare the differences in the number of asylum seekers and refugees among the countries.
Discuss any notable trends or patterns in the data.
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Submitted Answer
English:
Words:220
Paragraphs:4
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The provided information
shows
the amounts of asylum seekers and refugees located in six diverse countries with a data gathered from 2022.Overall,
total
numbers of asylum seekers and refugees has fluctuated over countries. Whilst Lebanon ranked at the top, Sweeden had the lowest total number of asylum seekers and refugees.In detail, number of asylum seekers remain almost constant instead of one country, Sweden with
50 thousands of
asylum seekers. In the other countries, the numbers of asylum seekers slightly remained
constant. While USA
and Lebanon had 200 thousands of
asylum seekers in 2022, Turkey had 250 thousands of
asylum seekers and ranked ath the top of the asylum seekers table. Similarly, Canada and Germany shown
another constant statistics with 100 and 150 thousands of
asylum seekers.On the other hand, the numbers of refugees changed and fluctuated. For instance, while Sweeden had
100 thousands of
refugees, Lebanon had 500 thousand of refugees. Besides, USA and Turkey are predicted to show
a simillar
numbers of refugees
with 300 and 350 thousands of
refugees in total. Likewise, Germany significantly had a half of the refugees of Lebanon
which is 250 thounsands
of refugees. Lastly, Canada had 150 thousands of
refugees in 2022. Thus, all countries are expected to show
a diverse numbers
of asylum seekers and refugees spesifically
in 2022.