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The response provides a general overview of the crime trends in Canadian regions but lacks precision in data interpretation and contains grammatical errors. Improved coherence and a wider range of vocabulary would enhance the clarity and effectiveness of the analysis.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 21 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 10 | |
| Lexical resource | 5 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 3 |
Question
The line chart shows the crime rates in four different regions of Canada from 2010 to 2015.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
Make comparisons where relevant.
Discuss any notable trends.
#Crime Rates
#Line Chart
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:144
Paragraphs:4
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Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
The provided information depicts the diverse rates of crime
spesifically
in Canada's four different regions between 2010 and 2015.Overall, it can be clearly seen that all regions except Quebec
shown
an
rapid increase over years.,Looking at the line chart in more detail, Ontario had 400
crime
rated at first and gradually increased the number of crime. Similarly, British Columbia's crrime
rates, which was
350 crimes in 2010, continuously rised
until 2015 and reached 450. Besides, Alberta's crime rates also climbed but
not in
the same rate with
British Columbia and Ontario. Alberta is shown
a growth starting from 300 to 350. Lastly
only Quebec shown
a decreasing line ever the years. Once, it had started with 250
it went down and reached 200 rates of crime.Thus, all regions are expected to
shown
diverse amounts of increase and decline.