IELTS Writing Academic Checker - Sample Band 6

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11 Apr 25, 04:57
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The response provides a general overview of the trends in waste recycling rates but lacks specific data points and detailed comparisons. Grammar is mostly accurate with a good range of structures, but coherence and cohesion could be improved by better linking ideas and providing more detailed analysis.
Overall score6.0
Grammatical range and accuracy7.0
Lexical resource6.0
Coherence & cohesion6.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors10
Grammatical range and accuracy1
Lexical resource1
Coherence & cohesion5
Task response3

Writing Task

#Environmental Issues
#Line Chart
The line chart presents the waste recycling rates (percentage) in four European countries from 2000 to 2020.
Outline the main trends in recycling rates over the years.
Compare the performance of the four countries in terms of recycling rates.
Identify any periods of significant changes and suggest possible causes.

Submitted Answer

Words98|Paragraphs2
English:UK English
Global Issues:
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Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
The primary trend in the line chart has been the gradual and sustained increase in the amount of recycled waste from 2000 to 2020. Germany has been the country that has carried out most of the waste recycling, followed by Italy, France, and Spain in decreasing order.
Among the four countries, Italy has shown a considerable increase in the amount of waste recycled from the year 2005 to 2010. The possible causes for these changes in Italy could be attributed to an increase in environmental awareness among the general public that resulted in an increase in waste recycling.

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