IELTS Writing Academic Checker - Sample Band 5
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The response provides a general overview of the data but lacks clarity and precision in describing trends and comparisons. Grammatical errors and awkward phrasing affect readability, while the vocabulary is limited and repetitive.
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| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 16 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 8 | |
| Lexical resource | 3 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
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| Country | 2016 | 2017 | 2018 | 2019 | 2020 | 2021 |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| UK | 1500 | 1480 | 1450 | 1430 | 1400 | 1380 |
| France | 1200 | 1220 | 1240 | 1250 | 1260 | 1270 |
| China | 3000 | 3100 | 3200 | 3300 | 3400 | 3500 |
| India | 2000 | 2050 | 2100 | 2150 | 2200 | 2250 |
| Australia | 800 | 810 | 820 | 830 | 840 | 850 |
The table below illustrates the number of public libraries in five different countries over a span of six years.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
Make comparisons where relevant.
Highlight any significant trends or irregularities.
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The presented table data describes
proportion
of public
libraries in UK
, Australia, France, China, India from 2016 to 2021. Overall, it can be seen that the number of public
libraries China was far higher than the other four countries.From 2016 to 2021, China, which is determined
as
was significantly higher between selected five countries
while Australia showed the lowest result. In 2016, China based on the figures, the maximum the number of public
libraries at 3000, while United Kindgom results account for total of these numbers.Within five years, the total count of
public
libraries, Australia and France were considerably lower compared to the other three countries. India measured at 2000-2250, over the period, it was slightly higher than United Kindgom. Between five years
United kindgom
decreased 1500
to 1380, while there were significant increase in other four countries, the quantity of public
libraries slowly increased in Australia 800
to 850.