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The response provides a general overview of the data but lacks detailed analysis and specific comparisons. Grammatical errors and limited vocabulary range affect clarity and precision, while coherence and cohesion could be improved with better organization and linking of ideas.

Overall score	5.5
Grammatical range and accuracy	5.0
Lexical resource	6.0
Coherence & cohesion	6.0
Task response	5.0

Writing Task

#Technology Adoption

#Pie Chart

The pie charts depict the percentage of different communication tools used by businesses in Germany and Canada in 2022.

Analyze the use of communication tools in businesses in Germany and Canada.

Identify any significant differences or similarities in the data.

Discuss the potential impact of these trends on business operations.

Canada

Germany

Submitted Answer

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The pie charts provide the percentage from business use various of communication platform in Germany and Canada in 2022.

Tools

mentioned are email, phone, video conferencing, instant messaging, and social media.

Overall, the figure shows email and phone are most commonly use in businesses, both in Germany and Canada. The percentage of those countries hit almost the same result. In Germany, 35% of businesses

using

email, while in Canada it reaches 30%, which is only

differences

Additionally, video conferencing and instant messaging are also widely used both in these counties. It can be seen on the charts that the result hit almost the same as email and phone. However, social media appears to be the last preferred. Businesses in these countries tend to prefer more using formal communication methods over social media.

The use of these four communication tools significantly impact in businesses

, because

it provides and facilitate the benefits for business such as effective communication, and enhance collaboration.

IELTS Writing Academic Checker - Sample Band 5.5

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Canada

Germany

Submitted Answer

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Total Errors	12
Grammatical range and accuracy	6
Lexical resource	1
Coherence & cohesion	3
Task response	2