IELTS Writing Academic Checker - Sample Band 6.5
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6.5
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The response is generally well-structured and uses a range of vocabulary effectively, but it lacks full coverage of all data points, particularly the 'Other' category. Grammar is mostly accurate with a good range of structures, though coherence could be improved by better linking of ideas.
| Overall score | 6.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 7.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 7.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 7.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 11 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4 | |
| Lexical resource | 2 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
Japan
Thailand
The pie charts represent the distribution of organic farming practices in five Asian countries (Japan, South Korea, Thailand, Vietnam, and Indonesia) in 2022.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
Make comparisons where relevant.
Identify any notable trends or irregularities.
#Agriculture
#Pie Chart
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:167
Paragraphs:4
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The pie charts
indicates
the proportion of organic farming productions in two different Asian nations, particularly Japan and Thailand in 2022. Overall, it is evident that both countries have the highest
distribution record of crop farming but the lowest rate of aquaculture and in other organic farming. However, Japan and Thailand remained the same position for forestry. Meanwhile, Thailand has a relatively higher
number of livestock farming compared to Japan.According to the data provided, Japan and Thailand have the
highest
percentage of production in crop farming
with Japan capped at 45% and Thailand a little lower than Japan at 40%. Conversely, there was no disparity between Japan and Thailand for their forestry sector
where both regions have the same number of distribution at 15% each.On the other hand, the data further illustrates that the rate of livestock farming production is
higher
in Thailand at 25% compared to Japan only at 20%.In conclusion, Japan and Thailand have similar distribution trend of organic farming in 2022.