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The response provides a basic comparison of water usage in the UK and Germany, but contains several grammatical errors and lacks variety in sentence structures. The task is generally addressed, but the analysis could be more detailed and cohesive, with improved lexical range and accuracy.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 18 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 8 | |
| Lexical resource | 3 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 3 |
Question
UK
Germany
Examine the water usage distribution in various sectors in the UK and Germany for the year 2019.
Summarize the main points from the data.
Compare the water usage between the two countries.
Note any significant differences or similarities.
#Water Usage
#Pie Chart
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:143
Paragraphs:3
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The pie charts indicate an examination of the water usage distribution in many sectors in the UK and Germany for the year 2019. There are two pie charts compared between the UK and Germany.
Overall, both nations have similarity trend
which
the majority of the water usage distribution is from domestic
sector, follow
by argriculture
sector, industrial sector, public services sector and other sector.The percentage of the main water usage distribution in the UK is 35 percent and in the Germanry is 40
percent
which is from domestic
sector. The rate of water usage distribution in argriculture
sector in the UK is 30 percent
which is more than Germanry which is 25 percent. Both nations have the same rate of water usage distribution in industrial
sector, public services sector and other sector which is 20 percent, 10 percent and 5 percent respectively.